The story is a complete bust; I can't develop and keep up with that many characters, and I certainly can't make a believable enchanted world while trying to keep up with the characters.
So I doubt the piece as a whole will ever go anywhere except my 'look back on how pathetic you used to be and feel better' documents box.
But...there was one character in there I vaguely remembered. Her name was Priscilla, but you should call her Prissy.
Here are the three scenes I wrote with her. I'm captivated by this character; she's kind of mean, but very vulnerable. I think she might have her own story brewing underneath the overzealous plot that has lead me to lose hope for 'Things'. Ejoy!
Monday
afternoon, Prissy sat on the railing of the front deck, wishing for cold. It
was so hot, and it was only May! The summer would get hotter, to be sure. She
looked down at her black top and thick purple scarf and black jeans, wondering
if it really was too hot to wear that
much black, and thinking she looked kind of punk to be living in a place like
Well Water. She wondered if the founders of the town realized how terrible that
name sounded, or if they’d meant it to be more like, Pleasant Water. Either
way, she was stuck in the tiny, hot, miserable town of Well Water.
“Hey!
Hey, Akron!”
Prissy
looked down, and saw with disdain that it was Calvin, the annoying son of the
family who came to Well Water every 4th of July holiday to fish in
Lake Well Water. He called her Akron, despite the fact she had introduced
herself as Priscilla Tabitha Akron, but you should call me Prissy.
“What
do you want, Calvin?” She asked, tossing her layered black hair, which was
currently streaked purple. “I’m not in the mood for you.”
Calvin
snickered in the obnoxious way he always snickered. “Yeah, right. Your sitting
there alone and bored, and your hot and sweaty, ‘cause you’re wearing all that
black, and you were just hoping I’d
show up!”
“Yeah,
right. Whatever,” Prissy said, rolling her blue eyes. “I would think you’d have better things to do
with your time than bug me. Then again, maybe not.” After all, how enthralling
could a summer of catching fish be?
“Whatever. Look, Akron, my Pop sent me over to warn you people about some guy that’s been reported around this area. He goes around and breaks into houses. He’ll probably go for yours, since it’s so ugly.”
“Whatever. Look, Akron, my Pop sent me over to warn you people about some guy that’s been reported around this area. He goes around and breaks into houses. He’ll probably go for yours, since it’s so ugly.”
“More
like because it’s the only house in this whole town that has anything valuable in it,” Prissy said smugly. “I
doubt your family has much in that camper of yours, if you vacation in a place
like this,”
“We’ve
got tons in our camper!” Calvin
retorted, sticking his tongue out at her.
“Sure,”
Prissy said, smiling. “Like, mountains of stuff from curio shops and fishing
tackle, right?”
Calvin wrinkled his nose at her. “You look so ugly when you smile like that, Akron,” And he raced off in the direction of the lake, leaving Prissy to wonder a little about the burglar going around. She slipped off the porch railing and went inside to tell her mother.
Calvin wrinkled his nose at her. “You look so ugly when you smile like that, Akron,” And he raced off in the direction of the lake, leaving Prissy to wonder a little about the burglar going around. She slipped off the porch railing and went inside to tell her mother.
The
heat wasn’t much better inside, and Mrs. Akron didn’t seem too concerned.
“Yeah, I heard about that,” She walked around Prissy with the Dirt Devil. Their
many cats didn’t’ like vacuums, and trying to pick up cat hairs with an
ancient, powerless Dirt Devil was somewhat of a thankless task. “By the way,
your father and I are driving up to Carmen tonight, for a date,”
“Mm hm,” Prissy said. “Sure,” A night of uninterrupted television and whatever food she could find. Awesome.
“Mm hm,” Prissy said. “Sure,” A night of uninterrupted television and whatever food she could find. Awesome.
Prissy
yawned and stretched. It was nearing ten, and her parents wouldn’t be home till
after midnight. They were having dinner with some friends and seeing a Broadway
show in Carmen. The movie ended abruptly about twenty minutes later, and it was
pitch black outside. Prissy gently lifted the three cats off of her and went to
the kitchen to get a snack. She flipped on the light, and froze.
There
was a guy standing in the kitchen. He was tall, wearing all black…and a ski
mask. Prissy’s heart stopped and started again a few times, as she remembered
what Calvin had said about a burglar going around the area. All the blood
drained from her face as the guy turned around and saw her. He took a step
towards her, and Prissy screamed.
“Shh!
Quiet!” He clamped a hand over her
mouth. “Calm down, ok? This is probably not
what you think,”
Prissy stared at him over his hand on her mouth, her eyes wide.
Prissy stared at him over his hand on her mouth, her eyes wide.
“Be quiet,” He repeated, and removed his
hand from her mouth.
She sagged against the wall, shaking. “What
are you doing here!?” She breathed.
“What
do you think?”
“Robbing my house?” Prissy replied, shrugging. “Are you gonna kill me? My mom will just freak if you do…and I don’t think I’m insured…” She realized that she was rambling senselessly, but she couldn’t stop.
“Robbing my house?” Prissy replied, shrugging. “Are you gonna kill me? My mom will just freak if you do…and I don’t think I’m insured…” She realized that she was rambling senselessly, but she couldn’t stop.
“I’m
not robbing your house, ok?” He said.
“I needed to find you,”
Prissy blinked. “Well…ok…why?”
Prissy blinked. “Well…ok…why?”
“I
can’t tell you. Can you be in Cade Center tomorrow?” He asked.
She
blinked again. “Um…maybe…why?”
“It’s
important,” He paused. “You are Priscilla
Akron, right?”
Seemed a little late to ask that. “Yeah,”
Seemed a little late to ask that. “Yeah,”
“Your
father is Professor Akron?”
“Yeah…why?”
“Be at the library in Cade Center at one tomorrow. It’s important.” He headed towards the door, and paused. “Don’t tell your parents about this.”
“Be at the library in Cade Center at one tomorrow. It’s important.” He headed towards the door, and paused. “Don’t tell your parents about this.”
And
he just…left. He opened the kitchen door and slipped out. Prissy let herself
sag down the wall till she was seated on the kitchen linoleum, and didn’t even
notice that seven cats were swarming around her, purring and meowing and
begging for attention.
“Oh…boy…”
She breathed.
Prissy
stood in the doorway of her parents’ room, twisting the hem of her pajama
shirt. She wished she knew what to do. She was scared, but curious. She hovered
a few more seconds, watching her amazing mom’s shoulders rise and fall, her
beautiful golden hair falling down over her face. She looked at her dad, snoring
softly, his face a little scruffy, murmuring softly once in a while. Prissy
took a deep breath, and stepped quietly over to the side of the bed her father
was on.
“Dad?”
She said softly.
Immediately,
his eyes opened. They fixed on Prissy, and he smiled. “Morning, Honey.
Something wrong? It’s a little early,”
Prissy
bit her lip, and her father sat up. “Come here,” She sat down next to him and
let him hug her. “Now, what’s the matter? You look upset,”
Prissy
sighed. “Um…well…somebody was here last night while you were gone,” She said
quickly.
“What
do you mean?” Her father asked.
“Um…”
She quickly described the scene in the kitchen the night before, and she
started to tremble at the thought of it. “And then he asked if you were my dad.
And…he told me to come to the library in Cade Center today…at one,”
“Hm.”
Was all her father said.
“I…I’m
scared. I don’t know what to do. So I came to you,”
Her father put his arms around her. “Oh, Prissy. I’m so glad you did. It’s nice to know you’re still my little girl,”
Her father put his arms around her. “Oh, Prissy. I’m so glad you did. It’s nice to know you’re still my little girl,”
“I’ll
always be your little girl,” Prissy said, wrapping her arms around him. Her dad
always made her feel so safe, she wanted to be his little girl forever. She
knew he wanted that, too. “So…what should I do?”
“You
should go to the library in Cade Center today at one,” Her father replied. “I
think I know who that was who came here. Listen to me, Prissy,” His hazel eyes
met hers, serious and concerned. “If this is about what I think it’s about, you
need to trust me. Say yes. I love you, but this is so important, it’s a risk
I’m willing to take, if you’re willing,”
“What
do you mean?” Prissy asked.
“I
can’t tell you. Do you trust me?”
Prissy
looked up into her dad’s eyes, and wondered how she could not trust him. “Absolutely. I’ll say yes, to whatever the question.
But…what about Mom?”
“I’ll
talk to her, Honey,” He said, kissing her forehead. “Go get dressed. I’ll take
you to Cade Center on my way to Carmen,” He was a professor at the university
there.
Prissy
nodded, and left for her room. She tingled with excitement, wondering what was
in store for her. It was going to be amazing, she knew that much. Her dad was
sure of it.
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